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It is generally accepted that families are not as close as they used to be. Give some reasons why this change has happened and suggest how families could be brought closer together.

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It is certainly true that family is the basis of society and the whole
life
 of people is intimately connected with it.
However
, nowadays, the relationship between family members significantly deteriorated
due to
 misunderstanding that leads to serious social problems. In my opinion,
this
 issue is the responsibility of each generation and the best way to solve it would be a restoration of traditional family values.
To begin
 with, it is well-known that one of the main reasons for the degeneration of relationships within the family is the rapid development of modern
life
. New opportunities and techniques
such
 as the Internet and other devices give a great possibility to the young generation and they prefer to spend a lot of
time
 in front of computers and TV
instead
 of socializing with family. Sometimes, mass media and the Internet affect negatively, promoting street
life
 and quick separation from family.
For instance
, it is evident that under
such
 power children prefer to spend
time
 with friends or computer games rather than with family.
Due to
 the economic crises, lack of money and restricted amount of resources most people are forced to spend a major part of their
time
 at work.
This
, definitely, leaves a mark on family relationships and on society as a whole.
For instance
, Saudi Arabia's government provide all nation with high quality of
life
 and their families have much
time
 to spend together
thus
 they did not experience
such
 problems.
Finally
, it is certainly true that the current situation depends on not only these factors that were mentioned above but
also
 on changes in ways of upbringing, education, globalization etc. which lead to reappraising of family values. In conclusion, I personally believe that an effective way to overcome
this
 problem might be spending more
time
 together than families normally do today.
Furthermore
, all family members should make effort to understand and support each other.
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