Some people believe that they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state. Do you agree or disagree with the above notion?
One of the controversial topics today relates to whether people should or should not contribute to the
tax
system. Although
some folks may find it unjustified to be taken
a part of their income, I advocate that all citizens pay Wrong verb form
take
taxes
for the sake of the whole community.
On the one hand, myriad folks opine that the government should never take their hard-earning
money for the sake of the country's development scheme. Correct your spelling
hard-earned
This
is especially true for those who earn an amount that barely supports their families and who are not satisfied with the public services provided by the government. In many countries, people have to pay taxes
of more than a quarter of their total income and yet do not get basic facilities like treatment, and education and they have to spend their own pocket money for those purposes. Hence
, it is clear that
they become angry about the tax
paying.
On the other hand
, it is a fact that taxes
are used by the government for developing
its nations as they are allocated for various kinds of essential matters. Change preposition
to develop
Firstly
, they are used for expanding and maintaining public transportation facilities, such
as expanding roads and highways and replacing old public transportation units. Secondly
, taxes
are utilised for providing
decent medical services and basic education for their residents. Change preposition
to provide
And
Correct word choice
Last
last
but not least, taxes
are also
used for funding military services, which is important for maintaining the political stability of a nation. As a nation's development depends mainly on the tax
system, it goes without saying why everyone should share a common responsibility to pay taxes
.
To conclude
, there are valid arguments on both sides. I, however
, am of the opinion that people had better aside by the regulation of tax
duties for the thriving of the whole society.Submitted by mintu258 on
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coherence and cohesion task
Your introduction and conclusion are clear and relate directly to the topic. Good use of cohesive devices such as 'on the one hand' and 'on the other hand' to show the different sides of the argument. Your main points are supported with relevant examples, but could be further developed.