Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend , while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences . Discuss both sides of this argument and give your own opinion

Digitalized gadgets are often used in learning.

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believe that it is a good development, others opine that

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leads to

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outcome

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.

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of

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and

also

explain why in my opinion, the former idea is worth supporting than the

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. On the

one

hand, there are various points against the

use

of computers for academic purposes.

Firstly

, it does not encourage good academic performance.

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is because too many distractions exist online and learners

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the

time

allocated for learning for other trivial things

such

as surfing from

one

social media to another or chatting with friends. They may even decide to watch movies other than

studying

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. To illustrate, Mc Demian in his research, found out that 80% of pupils utilizing computerized

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for studying end up performing poorly

at the end

of each academic session.

Secondly

, it is

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an expensive means of learning.the reason for

this

is that

alot

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a lot

of resources are required

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using

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which

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digital in nature to study. These

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from

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of

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down to

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of data in other to assess study materials.

On the other hand

, many reasons abound why others are in support of studying with computers.

To begin

, it makes learning across the globe possible.

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is so because

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one

would not need to travel out of his or her country in other to acquire knowledge from another country. People can easily take online courses from another continent

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the comfort of their homes.

For instance

, Ademola reported in PrimeTime newspaper that, he has been able to take numerous certification courses online from his

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through the

use

of his personal computer.

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, studying and learning with technological

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saves

time

. The reason for

this

is that

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one

do

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not have to search for study materials or

literatures

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from

one

hard copy

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textbooks

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to the other, which is

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. Rather, these can easily be accessed from online textbooks and e-books which will save them energy and

time

for other activities. In conclusion, despite the contrasting views about the

use

of computers for educational purposes, I

belief

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that the

use

of digital

equipments

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can not be overemphasized.