The table below illustrates how much money a single person and a couple in Australia need for a comfortable lifestyle after they retire.
The tabular chart depicts information about
difference
between unmarried and married persons Add an article
the difference
how
much funds spend Correct word choice
and how
for
living Change preposition
on
quality
of life after Correct article usage
a quality
give
up their field.
After analysing the table graph it can be seen clearly that a negligible Change the verb form
giving
distnict
was seen in the amount of money Correct your spelling
district
use
on transport in both categories. Change the form of the verb
used
In contrast
, 50$ are
Change the verb form
is
using
on food by Wrong verb form
used
a
single retired people, Correct article usage
apply
while
twofold via couples for a comfortable lifestyle. The number of spending capital on accomodation
was $184 and $196 in that groups, respectively.
Moving Correct your spelling
accommodation
further
, $140 is spent by Correct article usage
a bachelor
bachelor
on leisure, Fix the agreement mistake
bachelors
whereas
it increased by $62 however
, a difference of $1 was seen in the expenditure of cash on health. The utilization of money on clothing was $124 collectively in both categories. Lastly
, partnerless humans $37 use on others and $70 spouse
and the total expense of single human beingsChange preposition
on spouse
$
684 and married retired commoners.
Add a missing verb
is $
Overall
, it is crystal clear that the maximum amount of money spend on housing in the former section, whilst in the latter
the minimum dollars use on others.Add a comma
,latter
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 2 times.
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