In many countries nowadays, consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development
There is no denying the fact that having access to different kinds of international
foods
is considered a new development in all regions in recent years. Use synonyms
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belief that the expansion of food Is a significant part of all over the world, there is Add a hyphen
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also
an argument that producing Linking Words
foods
for the world has contributed to a negative impact on society.
on the one hand, consumers can buy anything they want even if the products come from a foreign country and that affects on profit of the supermarket. Use synonyms
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foods
that help the community from allergies Use synonyms
such
as milk and flour. Linking Words
In addition
, imported Linking Words
foods
give us a new taste and flavour even Chocolate, perhaps kids could eat healthy candy. Use synonyms
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Instead
of travelling to another region, It is a great idea for to supermarkets afford these Linking Words
foods
in our country.
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on the other hand
, plenty of people do not trust their products , because they have unknown ingredients. It is Linking Words
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possible to say that not all individuals afford their Flavor Linking Words
such
as Chinese Food, which is really spicy and salty. Linking Words
Moreover
, every region has a special taste and not all People like their flavours like Japeness they are eating alive animals. Linking Words
For instance
, rather than take their export food from the world, perhaps they create Linking Words
foods
from our country.
In conclusion, there are no easy answers to Use synonyms
this
question . On balance, Linking Words
however
, I tend to believe that the benefits outweigh the drawbacks for several reasons. Linking Words
Hence
, it is a Positive development for sensitive people and helps them from allergies.Linking Words
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