The chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010
As the chart displays information about male and female
teachers
in six types of educational institutions in the UK in 2010. It shows what percentage of teachers
were male and what percentage were female.
Overall
, it can be seen from the chart that women
were more predominated in the maternal role of teaching young children. However
, men were outstanding in teaching at the
higher level of education.
the majority of Correct article usage
a
women
were prominent in school
for children. The Fix the agreement mistake
schools
quantity
of female Change the quantifier
number
teachers
in nursery school
was approximately 95 per cent
. The situation was similarly
one-sided in primary school
, where over 90 per cent
of teachers
were women
. Additionally
, in secondary school
the number of Add a comma
,school
women
was
slightly outweighed Unnecessary verb
apply
than
men. The data represented the proportion of female Change preposition
by
teachers
in secondary school
to be roughly 55 per cent
. Men and Women
were equally represented in teaching college, which was 50 per cent
.
Lastly
, males held a larger share in teaching higher level
institutions. Add a hyphen
higher-level
This
was particularly true for universities, where twice as many males were teaching staff than females.Submitted by Jeyul on
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