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We can get knowledge from news. But some people even think we should not trust the journalists. What do you think? And what do you think are the important qulities that a journalist should have?

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Nowadays, the
news
 serves much
information
 that could be knowledge for
society
.
However
, some
people
 assume that
journalists
 do not always give
fact
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information
. I personally consider
thatjournalists
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that journalists
 must filter the
information
 which would be published to the public in case of avoiding the wrong perceptions.
Also
, giving
fact
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factual
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news
 is an important aspect that should be owned by the
journalists
 themselves. Some
people
 do not consider all the
news
 that they obtain
due to
lack
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a lack
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 of knowledge towards the
news
.
Therefore
, they just accept every
information
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piece of information
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 given without thinking
regarding
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about
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 the truth of it.
This
 is exacerbated in the situation in which the fake
information
 is
spreaded
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spread
 to the public,
such
people
 would consume it as a
fact
one
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apply
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and they would probably share
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it to
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to
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with
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 other
people
 which do not have any
information
 about it. If there is no
awarness
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awareness
 towards
this
 situation, it would be a sustainable impact on
society
.
For example
, the next generation would receive
a fake
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fake news
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news
 because the previous generation
do
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does
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 not debate about
the
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apply
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fake one.
The
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journalists
 are
important
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an important
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 part
in
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of
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 serving the
information
 to
public
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the public
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. They would determine the
fact
 and fake
news
 that would go to
society
. Indeed, some
journalists
 consider a difficulty if they do not
try
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to try
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 to share a fake one because the more
information
that is
 published, the more budget
earned
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.
However
, it is a bad thing in case of improving the quality of
society
 and the most particular is for
journalist
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the journalist
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 sector. In conclusion,
journalists
 must be encouraged to share
the
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fact
news
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and news
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 in order to educate
society
. They should not prioritize
budget
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the budget
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 more than the
truth
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true
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information
 in
this
 case.
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