1.B.Nowadays, people are spending increasingly large amounts of money on their marriage parties. Many people feel large and expensive weddings cause problems for the bride and groom. Do you agree? Use personal examples in your response.
every human need
merried
for the Correct your spelling
married
completely
human life. recently, many Replace the word
complete
people
wasted Use synonyms
much
money Correct quantifier usage
apply
of
their marriage Change preposition
on
party
Use synonyms
which
the bride Correct word choice
because
want
to show feel charmed and do anything for their wedding Change the verb form
wants
party
with paid very expensive Use synonyms
for
facilities Change preposition
apply
their
wedding Change preposition
for their
party
. Use synonyms
i
agree with the statement because every person Change the capitalization
I
have
Change the verb form
has
decise
to remember about their wedding. many Correct your spelling
decide
decided
people
think married for live Use synonyms
one
time so many Correct your spelling
once
bride
to Change to a plural noun
brides
decise
for happy Correct your spelling
decide
Correct word choice
and memorable
memorable
for their wedding Replace the word
memories
party
and Use synonyms
their
do not think about the budget for their wedding Replace the word
there
party
.
Use synonyms
the
first Correct article usage
apply
i
agree because many Change the capitalization
I
people
think one Use synonyms
times
for married so, many Change to a singular noun
time
people
do Use synonyms
the
best for Change the word
their
Use synonyms
party
. Add an article
the party
a party
for instance
, based on my experience, Linking Words
i
came from Change the capitalization
I
poor
family, but Add an article
a poor
i
want to Change the capitalization
I
married
with my Change the verb
marry
choosen
Correct your spelling
chosen
men
. Fix the agreement mistake
man
however
, Linking Words
i
and my relationship work hard Change the capitalization
I
for
to give the best in my wedding Change preposition
apply
party
Use synonyms
while
no matter the Linking Words
paid
Replace the word
pay
about
the room, makeup, Change preposition
apply
eat
and all Wrong verb form
eating
facilities
wedding Correct article usage
the facilities
party
. Use synonyms
nevertheless
, all Linking Words
people
think Use synonyms
same
like that me.
Correct article usage
the same
the
Correct article usage
apply
second,
every pair Linking Words
want
make Add the particle
towant
memorable
with Correct pronoun usage
it memorable
the
happy ending and Correct article usage
a
cherfull
for the wedding Correct your spelling
cheerful
cheerfully
party
. Use synonyms
for example
, many Linking Words
people
always show the photograph every session Use synonyms
in
Change preposition
at
wedding
Add an article
the wedding
a wedding
party
. Use synonyms
i
think no matter the cost Change the capitalization
I
about
the wedding Change preposition
of
party
the bride always Use synonyms
do
Correct subject-verb agreement
does
the
best.
in the conclusion, many Change the word
her
people
want the best for Use synonyms
the
their wedding Remove the article
apply
party
how matter the cost Use synonyms
for
facilities Change preposition
of
in
Change preposition
at
wedding
Add an article
the wedding
a wedding
party
, the relationship Use synonyms
feel
happy and memorable.Change the verb form
feels
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