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The bar chart provides information about how often people in the USA spent ate fast food from 2003 to 2013.

The bar chart provides information about how often people in the USA spent ate fast food from 2003 to 2013.
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The bar chart illustrates the proportion of
people
 who ate
hotel
food
 in the USA during 2003 -2013.
Overall
, most
people
 ate fast
food
 once a
week
,
while
 a small number of
people
 ate fast
food
 each day. In 2003, almost 4% of
people
 consume fast
food
 every day,
nevertheless
, 5% were never eaten
hotel
food
. Around 31% and 30% of
people
 consumed fast
food
 one time a
week
 and one or two
times
 a month respectively.Below 17% of
people
 ate fast
food
 many
times
 a
week
 and a few
times
 a year.
Furthermore
, in the years 2006 and 2013, the consumption level of fast
food
 was very high, which was approximately 33% of once a
week
 and one or two
times
 a month respectively.Almost 3% of
people
 ate fast
food
 every day
however
, 4% never ate
hotel
food
 in both years.15% of
people
 consumed fast
food
 a few
times
 a year. The percentage of
people
 who consumed
hotel
food
 many
times
 a
week
 in the year 2013 was between 15% and 20%.
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