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More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a foreign country. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks?

#students #study #colleges #universities #country
Today a lot of
students
 prefer to study at
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foreign countries' universities. There are several advantages and disadvantages of
this
 view in my opinion.
To begin
 with, there are lots of facilities and some reasons
to
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 many
students
who
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want to study abroad.
Firstly
, young people
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interest
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 in new things, namely new
place
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 or new friends or
new
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world
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. They consider that studying abroad
give
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 lots of good opportunities for them
such
 as
students
 can take new information about
world
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 and they will make friends with other culture people.
Moreover
, young
students
 will learn many new technologies depending on their subjects or interests. That's
mean
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 that they will have important knowledge from foreign educational organizations which
have
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 not
these
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 information
their
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 studying place or country. When these
students
 come back to their country, they will teach learning methods from abroad to the next young generation.
On the other hand
, there are some negative sides
of
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 studying foreign places.
Initially
,
students
 who feel emotional darkness,
for
example
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 homesickness. They will
difficult
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 making new friends or new atmosphere.
Furthermore
, they ought to learn some rules of
new
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 country and they can protect some bad groups of people. In conclusion,despite
of
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lots of negative sides, these days many
students
 want to study
foreign
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at foreign
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 universities or colleges.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • opportunities
  • personal growth
  • development
  • exposure
  • diverse
  • perspectives
  • language skills
  • job prospects
  • adapting
  • environment
  • financial considerations
  • costs
  • homesickness
  • social isolation
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