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The pie chart and the table chart provides information of the total value and sources of fish imported in the US between 1988 and 2000

The pie chart and the table chart provides information of the total value and sources of fish imported in the US between 1988 and 2000
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The pie
chart
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 provides data on
fish
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 imported to
United
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the United
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 States of America from Canada, China and others in the
year
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 1988, 1992 and 2000,
while
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 the table
chart
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 provides the total value in Billions of Dollars
of
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for
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 the above-mentioned imports. It is observed in the table
chart
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 that, the highest
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fish
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number of fish
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 was imported to
United
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the United
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 States of America in the
year
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 2000 i.e., 10.72 billion Dollars compared to that of 1992 and 1988. The least value of
import
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imports
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 stands at 6.57 billion Dollars in the
year
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 1988 which gradually increased over a period.
Whereas
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 the pie
chart
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 illustrates that in the
year
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 ,1988 Canada exported the highest number of
fish
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 which is 60% and was reduced to almost half i.e., 34% in the
year
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 1992 and stood at 28% in 2000.
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, the
fish
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 imported from China increased over a period which is at 30% in 2000.
Overall
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, the highest source of
fish
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 imported from other countries stands the highest in 2000 which is at 42%
in
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apply
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2000 and the most money spent in the same
year
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 73%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words chart, fish, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "provides" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "provides" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stands" was used 3 times.
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