The bar chart shows coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cuties. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cuties.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and comparisons where relevant.
The given bar chart provides information on the percentage of folk purchasing and consuming
coffee
and tea across the
five
major
cities
in Australia.
Overall
, the majority of residents in
four
of
five
cities
reported having gone to a
coffee
shop in the
last
4 weeks, except those in Adelaide.
Additionally
, people in all
five
cities
showed the least interest in purchasing fresh
coffee
. With regard to those who had visited the
coffee
shops for
coffee
or tea across the
four
cities
(Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, and Hobart) in the past
four
weeks, the percentage was between 55% and 63%.
However
,
this
trend was not witnessed in Adelaide, only 40% of customers were recorded. Notably, people in Adelaide tend to opt for buying instant
coffee
instead
,
while
this
trend only ranked second for the remaining
four
cities
, ranging from 45% to 55%. In terms of purchasing fresh
coffee
in the
last
four
weeks, people in all
five
cities
showed the least interest in doing so, accounting for approximately 33% to 43% of customers.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, five, cities, four with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.

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