The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000, 2023 and future projections for 2025.

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The chart illustrates the

exportation

of international

tourism

daily

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dairy

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products

and meat

products

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Southland between 2000 and 2023. It

also

represents the future projections

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for

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2025.

Overall

, it can be clearly seen that the

exportation

of international

tourism

is at the highest position

while

meat

products

are at the least position over the period,

expect

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except

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for

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daily

products

, these

are

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fluctuated. The

exportation

of international

tourism

began at 8

billion

in 2000

whereas

it will reach a peak of 10

billion

in 2025. In 2023, the figure for international

tourism

is reaching

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around 9

billion

. The

exportation

daily

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dairy

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products

was up to 7

billion

and will increase just over 9

billion

between 2000 and 2025 respectively. At present, it

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stood

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billion

in 2023. The proportion of meat

products

has

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the least position rather than other exports. It has dropped from 6

billion

to just over 5

billion

. In future, it will decrease and will reach

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billion

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The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000, 2023 and future projections for 2025.

Many claim that the fast food industry had a negative effect on evironment, eating habit and families. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation.

Some cities have vehicle-free days when private cars, trucks, and motorcycles are banned from the city center. Public transportation like buses, taxis, and metros are advised. To what extent do you think the advantages of this policy outweigh the disadvantages

Some people think a crime should always have a fixed punishment like life for murder, while others believe you should take the circumstances of the crime into account. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.