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The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000, 2023 and future projections for 2025.

The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000, 2023 and future projections for 2025.
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The chart illustrates the
exportation
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 of international
tourism
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,
daily
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dairy
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products
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 and meat
products
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at
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 Southland between 2000 and 2023. It
also
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 represents the future projections
in
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for
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 2025.
Overall
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, it can be clearly seen that the
exportation
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 of international
tourism
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 is at the highest position
while
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 meat
products
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 are at the least position over the period,
expect
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except
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of
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for
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 daily
products
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, these
are
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fluctuated. The
exportation
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 of international
tourism
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 began at 8
billion
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 in 2000
whereas
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 it will reach a peak of 10
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 in 2025. In 2023, the figure for international
tourism
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 is reaching
at
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around 9
billion
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. The
exportation
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 of
daily
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dairy
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products
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 was up to 7
billion
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 and will increase just over 9
billion
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 between 2000 and 2025 respectively. At present, it
is
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stood
by
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at
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 3
billion
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 in 2023. The proportion of meat
products
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 has
at
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the least position rather than other exports. It has dropped from 6
billion
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 to just over 5
billion
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. In future, it will decrease and will reach
at
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5
billion
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words exportation, tourism, products, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
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