You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangements and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter:- 1. describe your situation 2. explain your problems and why it is difficult to work 3. say what kind of accommodation you would prefer.

Hi Sir, Hope you get my letter in the best of spirits. I'
m
writing
this
letter to bring your attention towards the problems I'
m
facing in my current accommodation with a request to change it. I'
m
a first-year student in the Bio-chemistry field staying in room no. 20 in the Block B campus. The one with whom I'
m
sharing the room is a third-year music student. By nature, he is good, but as his field is music, so he used to play musical equipment most of the time, which will create problems for me in
concentrate
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on my syllabus.
Moreover
, he is in his
last
year, so he has fewer tasks to learn, read, and write; that's why, he is more on his practice.
On the contrary
, I'
m
a first-year student who needs more time to devote towards my educational program to clear the concepts. So, our opposed study fields are acting as hurdles to our work. I've experienced, that majority of my classmates shared the area with the same classmates, or if they are different, even belong to the same study field. Thereby, it is beneficial to study in that environment, and
also
have eased to take help of each other in their studies. I believe, that by mistake, the wrong room has been assigned to me. I request you to please look over
this
matter, and kindly change my place soon so that I can look after my academics. Looking to hearing a positive response soon. Yours Sincerely, Lisha Lokai.
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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