You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is no doubt that these days developed
nations
often send financial aid to countries
that suffering from poverty, but all this
kind of help doesn't solve poverty. The question is, whether rich countries
should give different kinds of help to poor nations
?
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this
essay, I am going to discuss this
statement and write my own opinion.
In terms of view, helping needy countries
with money
solves a lot of issues. The main reason given to support this
claim is that with a good financial state
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,state
countries
can develop many fields and it's positively reflected in their residents. To illustrate, developed the damaged education buildings and set a professional staff there and put a good salary for them. In other words
, the education field is considered essential in a way to developing the country and improving every field that society needs it. With money
the poor country can solve many problems that they face for a long time.
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the money
Moreover
, besides
money
there are a lot of things can developed countries
do to help poor nations
. Firstly
, send trained volunteers in many fields to countries
that are in need. In other words
, poor countries
usually don't have the high quality of work and services as rich nations
. Secondly
, providing scholarships to young and talented with free workshops. This
is because improving the education field in poor nations
required a long time to be
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Also
, poor countries
can't improve everything with their small opportunities. Also
, rich countries
can send good doctors and build good hospitals in poor areas.
In conclusion, although
financial aid is helping a lot also
, poor countries
need more than money
. Therefore
, I believe that developed nations
should give other types of help to poor countries
rather than financial aid.Submitted by jqanber4 on
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