The chart bellow shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The chart bellow shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
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The bar graph gives data about the number of buying and drinking habits of
coffee
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and tea in five cities in Australia.
Overall
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, the percentage of
people
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who drank
coffee
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or tea in a café constituted the largest proportion,
while
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only a few
people
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bought either fresh or instant
coffee
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in the
last
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month. Regarding the statistics, we see that
people
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who visited a café for buying some
coffee
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or tea had generally the highest point, with Melbourne, Hobart, and Sydney reaching over three-fifths, and it is followed by Brisbane approximately over half of the local residents. In Adelaide,
by contrast
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, it had the lowest point by just under a half. Turning to
people
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who bought instant
coffee
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, there is not a significant divergence in the five cities, ranging from above 45% to under 55%.
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that,
people
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who bought fresh
coffee
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in Sydney and Melbourne was the highest proportion, with 44% and 43% respectively,
whereas
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Brisbane and Adelaide showed the lowest point just nearly a third.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, people with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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