In the past, buildings ofien reflected the culture of a society but today all modern buildings look alike and cities throughout the world are becoming more and more similar.What do you think is the reason for this, and is it a good thing or a bad thing?

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similar construction is used throughout the cities,
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the
buildings
displayed the culture and the heritage of the society. In the following
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the pros and cons of
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an architecture.
Firstly
, it is important that the culture and the heritage of a country should be treasured. In the past people constructed with the availability of resources and
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planned scientifically in order to have ample light and ventilation.
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, earlier
buildings
were constructed with high ceilings, today we rarely come across as there are restrictions imposed by the government as high
buildings
will reduce the light or ventilation to your neighbour,
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co-exist.
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imposing guidelines for construction will help the society for proper development and planning of the cities in order to accommodate and have access to the resources available. These rules are necessary
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my opinion and I think
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I observed that Abudabhi has similar houses constructed throughout the city and being a desert people are not deprived of any availability of resources. The city looks very subtle with enough space between two
buildings
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, In my ,opinion certain restrictions need to be imposed in order to plan and improve the city properly.
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, the disposal of wastes or the way water and sewage pipes are connected to the main source.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
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  • Prediction or recommendation

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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  • In conclusion
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  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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