The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
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The chart gives information about what kind of habits Australian people have regarding buying and drinking beverages in five Australian cities.
Overall
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, going to a coffee shop was the most popular in all cities except for Adelaide,
while
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purchasing fresh coffee was the lowest. Looking at going to a cafe
first,
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the percentage of citizens who chose
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option in Melbourne was the highest, at just under 65%, followed by the figures for Hobart and Sydney, at about 63% and 61% respectively.
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, approximately 55% of Brisbane citizens enjoyed going there,
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just under 50% of Adelaide preferred to go to a cafe which was the lowest. In terms of buying fresh coffee, the figure for individuals who opted for
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method in Sydney was the most popular, at just under 4%, followed by the percentage of residents for Melbourne and Hobart, at just over 40% and just under 40% respectively.
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about 35% of Brisbane and the remained city people preferred to buy fresh ones. In the buying instant group, the number of people in Hobart was the highest, at just under 55%, followed by the figure for Brisbane and Adelaide, at about 52% and 50% respectively.
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, the percentage of Melbourne was about 48% and that of Sydney was just over 45%, which was the lowest.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • survey results
  • coffee and tea buying habits
  • instant coffee
  • fresh coffee
  • cafe culture
  • social influences
  • economic factors
  • city demographics
  • seasonal trends
  • marketing strategies
  • consumer preferences
  • availability
  • popularity
  • consumption patterns
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