The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
The chart gives information about what kind of habits Australian people have regarding buying and drinking beverages in five Australian cities.
Overall
, going to a coffee shop was the most popular in all cities except for Adelaide,
while
purchasing fresh coffee was the lowest. Looking at going to a cafe
first,
the percentage of citizens who chose
this
option in Melbourne was the highest, at just under 65%, followed by the figures for Hobart and Sydney, at about 63% and 61% respectively.
However
, approximately 55% of Brisbane citizens enjoyed going there,
while
just under 50% of Adelaide preferred to go to a cafe which was the lowest. In terms of buying fresh coffee, the figure for individuals who opted for
this
method in Sydney was the most popular, at just under 4%, followed by the percentage of residents for Melbourne and Hobart, at just over 40% and just under 40% respectively.
Whereas
about 35% of Brisbane and the remained city people preferred to buy fresh ones. In the buying instant group, the number of people in Hobart was the highest, at just under 55%, followed by the figure for Brisbane and Adelaide, at about 52% and 50% respectively.
While
, the percentage of Melbourne was about 48% and that of Sydney was just over 45%, which was the lowest.
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