The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
The first chart depicts the percentage of households with electrical appliances in 99
years
. The second graph illustrates the number of hours of housework per week per household from 1920 to 2019.
The percentage of washing machine
in 1920 started at 40%, increased to 70% in 1960, slightly decreased in 1980, and increased to 74% in 2019. In 1920, the refrigerator started at 0% and extremely increased to 100% in 1980 and became stable at 100% till 2019. The vacuum cleaner highly increased from 30% in 1920 and became 100% in 2000 and 2019. In 1960 the Fix the agreement mistake
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The first charts show the percentage of electrical appliances like washing machine, refrigerator, and vacuum cleaner increased in 99 years
. The second graph show number of housework decreased every 20 years
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