Some people might say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money . How might having a lot of money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy

Quite a good number of people are of the opinion that being Rich equals

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great happiness and most certainly to an extent

this

might be correct though there are a couple of other factors that can bring Joy

people's

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lives too.we will discuss extensively

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them as we proceed There is a saying that

Money

makes the world go round. Having a

lot

of

money

gives comfort in the sense that an individual can afford to buy comfort with wealth.

Also

having a

lot

of

money

accords

one

the respect he/she deserves.When you have a

lot

of

money

,you are a person of value in

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society, your opinion will be highly valued. Poverty is most times equated with failure and wealth is a yardstick

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which most persons measure Sucess.

for

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instance in Nigeria Aliko Dangote is someone of uttermost value and is a household and we'll

known

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name because he has a

lot

of riches, investments attached to his person.

On the other hand

,there a quite a number of things that can make

one

happy

besides

being wealthy and

one

of them is peace of mind. Peace of mind is greatly

underated

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underrated

but in my

opinion

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it's

one

of life's greatest

asset

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. It means having a clear mind without something troubling you,there is no problem waiting for you to solve,the environment in which you reside

in

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not at war and so on Another thing to can make someone

be

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in a great mood is achieving set out goals. We all strive to get to certain goals we have set out for our lives and the attainment of

such

can give

one

a sense of being complete In conclusion,there

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lot

of ways to be content in life,we just need to figure out what we require of life and pursue

towards

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achieving it.