Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extend do you agree?

Some

people

believe it is more beneficial to spend money on railway improvement

instead

of road development by the

government

. I completely agree that the railway system benefits more for any country in comparison with

roads

. On the one hand, investing in the

roads

encourage

people

to

driving

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and

use

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used

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vehicles.

Instead

of buying tickets for public

transport

people

prefer to purchase a car. One of the main results of increasing the number of cars is traffic, and traffic

make

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traffic jams. Another result is air pollution that I think,

it

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is the worst consequence because illness is the following result. Diseases like heart attack, stroke and cancer are common in big cities that have contaminated air.

On the other hand

, the improvement of the railway system means going up the number of trains and

thedevelopment

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the development

of public

transport

. When the

government

invest in public

transport

like bus and train,

people

are persuaded to utilize

this

kind of transportation, and

this

causes air pollution declines.

Hence

, the spending of the

government

on health insurance goes down and it can save

this

excessive money for improving other sections of the country.

Moreover

, the amount of money that

people

spend on public

transport

is lowered that the maintenance of a car, and it is another advantage.

Consequently

, the avails of improving the railways as a form of public

transport

outweigh the development of

roads

. In fact, the expenditure

saves

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after developing the railways by the

government

and citizens

is

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more advantageous compared to the improvement of

roads

.