You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board. Write a letter to Mr. Walker, and Give your reason for writing Tell about your education Describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job

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Dear Mr Walker, I am writing to you to express my interest in the

Quality

Assurance Manager post which you advertised on the London University notice board. I am Jennifer Ramos, a final year master's degree student in business management at London University. My bachelor's degree is from Ulster University specialising in Total

Quality

Management.

Although

I am a student, I have been working part-time as a

quality

assurance officer at ABC Healthcare Corporation. I have done several projects for the improvement of

quality

healthcare

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industry.

Moreover

, my articles related to

this

topic have been published in international reputed journals.

Despitebeing

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Despite being

a part-time employee, ABC

corporation

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helped me to gain knowledge and polished my skill in healthcare

quality

assurance. I believe my technical knowledge and educational qualifications will make me a perfect candidate for

this

job. I look forward to meeting you to discuss

further

details. Yours faithfully Manshad

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Linking words
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

150 words

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Structure your letter

In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

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