You are a current student of Loren Brusque University, studying Business Administration. You want to apply for the post of Quality Assurance Manager you have recently seen on the university's notice board. Write a letter to Mr. Walker, and Give your reason for writing Tell about your education Describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job

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Dear Mr Walker, I am writing to you to express my interest in the

Quality

Assurance Manager post which you advertised on the London University notice board. I am Jennifer Ramos, a final year master's degree student in business management at London University. My bachelor's degree is from Ulster University specialising in Total

Quality

Management.

Although

I am a student, I have been working part-time as a

quality

assurance officer at ABC Healthcare Corporation. I have done several projects for the improvement of

quality

healthcare

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industry.

Moreover

, my articles related to

this

topic have been published in international reputed journals.

Despitebeing

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Despite being

a part-time employee, ABC

corporation

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helped me to gain knowledge and polished my skill in healthcare

quality

assurance. I believe my technical knowledge and educational qualifications will make me a perfect candidate for

this

job. I look forward to meeting you to discuss

further

details. Yours faithfully Manshad

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A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Grammar mistakes
 

9 paragraphs

150 words

6.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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