Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?

Everyone knows that
happiness
is necessary
in
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our life and take a major part.
Likewise
, it's really difficult to find
your
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happiness
and calm when you have a lot of thoughts and troubles. But even a little thing could be the reason for your good mood. I think that every
achievements
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can change our life to the positive side and it's not difficult if you can find a way how to deal with it. Nowadays, a number of people feel stressed and cannot find something positive and struggle with it.
For example
, if a person feels stressed about his workplace, he should
do
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notice
about
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his plans,
have
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and have
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a holiday or
schedules
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. If
this
person will have a holiday and spend time with his family or relatives he will find
happiness
in little things like
this
. Because at the
last
time
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,time
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people started to appreciate everything which they have and thank God for it. But not always we can define it because of our problems. As regards achievement, every personality has its own standards of
their
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goals and
happiness
. Maybe for someone even one flower can mean a lot of things,
while
someone
choose
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something bigger.
For example
, since
of
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our
childhood
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we have started to do notes and plan our future. It's
such
kind of thing how we learn to do schedules about our targets, we
also
find
happiness
when we achieve
it
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them
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. I think that step by step we are starting to define it in everything that happens in our life. In conclusion, everything that we have learned from our childhood
behaviors
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can reflect in our future. And that person who learned how to be happy for every little chance and achievement, can define positive sides everywhere and be happy.
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