Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness?
Everyone knows that
happiness
is necessary in
our life and take a major part. Change the preposition
for
Likewise
, it's really difficult to find your
Correct pronoun usage
apply
happiness
and calm when you have a lot of thoughts and troubles. But even a little thing could be the reason for your good mood. I think that every achievements
can change our life to the positive side and it's not difficult if you can find a way how to deal with it.
Nowadays, a number of people feel stressed and cannot find something positive and struggle with it. Change to a singular noun
achievement
For example
, if a person feels stressed about his workplace, he should do
notice Unnecessary verb
apply
about
his plans,Change preposition
apply
have
a holiday or Correct word choice
and have
schedules
. If Fix the agreement mistake
schedule
this
person will have a holiday and spend time with his family or relatives he will find happiness
in little things like this
. Because at the last
time
people started to appreciate everything which they have and thank God for it. But not always we can define it because of our problems.
As regards achievement, every personality has its own standards of Add a comma
,time
their
goals and Correct pronoun usage
apply
happiness
. Maybe for someone even one flower can mean a lot of things, while
someone choose
something bigger. Change the verb form
chooses
For example
, since of
our Change preposition
apply
childhood
we have started to do notes and plan our future. It's Add a comma
,childhood
such
kind of thing how we learn to do schedules about our targets, we also
find happiness
when we achieve it
. I think that step by step we are starting to define it in everything that happens in our life.
In conclusion, everything that we have learned from our childhood Correct pronoun usage
them
behaviors
can reflect in our future. And that person who learned how to be happy for every little chance and achievement, can define positive sides everywhere and be happy.Change the spelling
behaviours
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
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- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
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- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...
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