The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The graph illustrates the quantity of
waste
generated by three companies within 15 years.
overall
, it is clear that
during 15 years there is a decrease in producing waste
products by company
A while
there is a dramatically
increase can be seen in Change the adverb
dramatic
company
C
.
At the beginning of the period company
A created above 2000 tonnes
waste
which is much more than the other two companies but in ,2015 they produced less than 9 Change preposition
of waste
tonnes
which is
lower than Change the verb form
are
company
C
which produced nearly 9.5 tonnes
of waste
.
The graph for company
B fluctuates, as it is given at the beginning of the period there was a grown
from 6 to 9.5 tones per year but suddenly it declined sharply as much that Replace the word
growth
at the end
of ,2015 it produced just 3 tonnes
per year that is
3 times lower than group
c
and 6 tones lower than group
A.
In the end ,group
C
produced more than others while
Group
A produced more than Group
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, company, c, tonnes, group with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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