The graph and chart below give information on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius (°C) and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities.

The graph and chart below give information on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius (°C) and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities.
The graph and chart below illustrate the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in
degrees
and the average number of days with rainfall monthly for
Brisbane
and
Canberra
, which are the cities of Australia.
Overall
, the temperatures in
Brisbane
are higher than that in
Canberra
,
also
rainfall is more common in
Brisbane
. In these 2 cities, the hottest months are December, January and February. In
Brisbane
, the temperature reaches 30
degrees
maximum,
while
in
Canberra
it reaches about 21
degrees
.
On the other hand
, the coldest months are June, July and August, and it reaches 10
degrees
in
Brisbane
,
while
in
Canberra
it reaches nearly 0
degrees
. In February and March, it rains for almost half of the month in
Brisbane
and
this
time of the year is the rainiest season there.
However
, in
Canberra
, it is the opposite and it rains mostly (around ten days) between June and October.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • average daily maximum
  • average daily minimum
  • rainfall
  • degrees Celsius (°C)
  • anomalies
  • trends
  • geographic location
  • climate zones
  • seasonal changes
  • data representation
  • comparison
  • temperature range
  • weather patterns
  • statistical analysis
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