The graph and chart below give information on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius (°C) and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities.
The graph and chart below illustrate the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in
degrees
and the average number of days with rainfall monthly for Brisbane
and Canberra
, which are the cities of Australia.
Overall
, the temperatures in Brisbane
are higher than that in Canberra
, also
rainfall is more common in Brisbane
.
In these 2 cities, the hottest months are December, January and February. In Brisbane
, the temperature reaches 30 degrees
maximum, while
in Canberra
it reaches about 21 degrees
. On the other hand
, the coldest months are June, July and August, and it reaches 10 degrees
in Brisbane
, while
in Canberra
it reaches nearly 0 degrees
.
In February and March, it rains for almost half of the month in Brisbane
and this
time of the year is the rainiest season there. However
, in Canberra
, it is the opposite and it rains mostly (around ten days) between June and October.Submitted by okhaliunaa on
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