The graph and chart below give information on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius (°C) and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities.

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The graph and chart below illustrate the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in

degrees

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and the average number of days with rainfall monthly for

Brisbane

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and

Canberra

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, which are the cities of Australia.

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, the temperatures in

Brisbane

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are higher than that in

Canberra

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also

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rainfall is more common in

Brisbane

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. In these 2 cities, the hottest months are December, January and February. In

Brisbane

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, the temperature reaches 30

degrees

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maximum,

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Canberra

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it reaches about 21

degrees

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On the other hand

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, the coldest months are June, July and August, and it reaches 10

degrees

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Brisbane

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while

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Canberra

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it reaches nearly 0

degrees

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. In February and March, it rains for almost half of the month in

Brisbane

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and

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time of the year is the rainiest season there.

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, in

Canberra

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, it is the opposite and it rains mostly (around ten days) between June and October.

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The graph and chart below give information on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius (°C) and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities.

In many countries people have to pay for medical care, but some think that it should be a free service provided by the government. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In many countries around the world, obesity is increasing, especially among children. One solution is to increase the tax on food and drinks which contain large amounts of sugar. How effective is this solution? What other measures would be effective?