Write about following topic: Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

it is certainly a very interesting question, Does what a
person
wears tell us so much about
theirculture
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their culture
and personality or not, I tend to agree that
clothes
can tell us some basic things, but that they do not tell us much more than those basic things. First of all, I will consider how a
person
's choice of
clothes
reveals their culture.
This
is true in some ways,
for example
, in many ,countries people have a distinctive national style of wear and some particular
clothes
and fabrics are typical of certain areas.
Therefore
,
clothes
can sometimes reveal the ethnic origins and culture of a
person
, but as so many people nowadays dress in business suits or jeans and T-shirts worldwide
this
is becoming less and less true. As the character is concerned, we can tell in some places if the wearer of
clothes
is a follower of fashion. Another aspect of the dress is whether the
clothes
look clean and ironed
To sum up
, I would say that we can find out something about a
person
from their style of dress but only the surface things, and not the deeper character.
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