Your recently ordered a small item online but when it arrived , it was damaged

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Dear Sir I am writing

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letter with the purpose of complaining about

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I bought online

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Three days ago I saw an item that I needed for my work in online stores and it was very interesting to me,I liked it in every way and I was attracted to it.

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I bought a printer that I liked.When my order arrived,I noticed that it was damaged and that someone had used it before. Since

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purchase had not cost me a small fortune.I have been inordinately stressed about the situation. I would be very grateful if you could exchange the printer new one

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and set it up I have two years warranty. I hope the problem will be solved as quickly as possible and look forward to receiving your response letter soon.

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faithfully Mukhammadjonov Ilkhomjon

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0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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8 paragraphs

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Your recently ordered a small item online but when it arrived , it was damaged

Fully explain your ideas

Young people are often influenced by their peers. This is called peer group pressure. Do the advantages outweight disadvantages?

In recent years, online education is becoming more and more popular. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon? Use specific details and examples to explain your opinion.

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try nd improve such situations Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.

Some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. both these attitudes and give your own opinion.