The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Pie charts depict the development of 3 segments of ages over the next 50
years
, commencing from 2000, in two main countries, Yemen and Italy,
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can be clearly seen a gradual rise of adults over the Correct pronoun usage
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years
in Yemen country Use synonyms
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a remarkable downward in the adult rate in Italy,
glancing at pies charts reveal that in 2000, the teenager category (00-14 Linking Words
years
) was roughly equal to the adult's portion (15-59 Use synonyms
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) with nearly 46,3 % ,Use synonyms
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the estimation in the next 50 Add a comma
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predicts a dramatic drop in teenager ratio, from exactly 50,1% to 37%, Use synonyms
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adults portion (15-59 Linking Words
years
) will increase with 11% by the year of 2050, Use synonyms
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a slight jump of (60+ Linking Words
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) category to 5,7% Use synonyms
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of 3,6% in 2000, Linking Words
on the other hand
, Italy registered a high percentage of adults (15-59 Linking Words
years
) in 2000 with 61,6%, Use synonyms
nonetheless
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rate will decrease to 46,2% Linking Words
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the elder's portion (60+ Linking Words
years
) will increase from 24,1% to 42,3% in 2050, Use synonyms
as well as
a fractional reduce in teenagers (0-14 Linking Words
years
) with 3,2% of rate difference.Use synonyms
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