In many countries today, crime novels and TV crimes drams are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV show are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

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In the modern era when we live, there is no denying that many

people

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like books and virtual shows about

crime

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occasionally these things are illustrated different worlds which human beings don’t see.

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, day by day audiences love more than

crime

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movies, series and etc. yesterday. I personally believe that in the future goods about bad lives will publish more and more. First and foremost,

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recent research, many

people

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who live in cities have ordinary, boring and safe lives.

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this

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life is felt boring by humans who live in urban and villages which are a

crime

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rate lower than others

hence

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human beings tend to consume

products

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about

crime

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, school and study are boring for kids so these young

people

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avoid these two things meanwhile elder

people

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avoid their ordinary boring lives too.

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, watch

crime

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series and books because

crime

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series had

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apply

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diverse

worlds

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Secondly

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crime

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goods always have many bad characters

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definitely there is a good main character in

crime

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products

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then

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this

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role can charm humans who consume the

products

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Such

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Batman

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batman

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movies. In

Batman

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movies,

Batman

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always fights a lot of evil characters but in the

end

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everyone loves

Batman

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also

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people

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imitate the main hero character.Thanks to

crime

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products

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we can have a better society. In conclusion,

crime

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dramas are showed interesting life types to us.

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, many of us imitate good characters’ behaviours. From my point of view,

crime

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goods will help us to create a better future.

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