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As countries become more developed, many fast food outlets move into the country giving local people greater access to fast food, advantage and disadvantage:

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As a result
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 of opening up to other cultures and countries, various outlets find the opportunity to trade their products to consumers, especially
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,
in other words
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, fast
food
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, so
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 essay will discuss some benefits and demerits of the same, On the one hand, undoubtedly, the fast
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industry
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 has saved time for millions of employees in
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 rapidly developing world, where every second counts,
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instead
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 of spending time cooking at home, with only a pre-call , your meal is already ready for you,
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, fast
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 stores help the locale area to enhance the employability,
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 as hiring talented cookers, commercial agent, housekeeping and more required profiles which enhance economically the local place,
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 the development of various
industry
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, design content, construction
industry
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 and its components,
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, fast
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 is an unhealthy lifestyle, the low quality of fast
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 contains chemicals in order to preserve it as long as possible,
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 the hygiene that the majority of store manager does not respect,
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, the consumer most of the time fall sick or even worst happen to endure
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 poisoning,
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,
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industry
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 promotes a bad health habit to the generations, and from another perspective,the price allocated to buy the fast
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 is very expensive compared to the monthly salary, because the homemade meals are more healthy and cheaper than the fast
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,
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 as the small retail stores in Europe are known to be way exaggerated in terms of prices,
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, I believe that fast
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 could be harmful in the long run to health
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 the budget,
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, it enhances widely the local economy and brings income to the residents.
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