The air we breathe has a major impact on our health and the environment. However, the air pollution is constantly growing and at current levels it can be fought only globally. That is to say, individual efforts to improve air quality will not give any results, and it's solely responsibility of our governments to reduce air pollution. Do you agree or disagree?

The alarming rate of

air

pollution

has become one of the biggest problems and in the present state, if measures are not taken to control the

pollution

worldwide, it would deteriorate our health and our future generations

while

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this

can be achieved together as a nation. Some of them think that

this

cannot be achieved by people but rather it's the

government

's job. The decrease in

air

quality is a serious concern and I am of the opinion that I disagree and

this

issue must be dealt with together by supporting the

government

. Globalization and industrialization which led to deforestation and the cutting down of trees

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to an extent impacted the

air

we breathe today.

Besides

this

several factors like emission of gaseous substances, forest fires, vehicles, burning of waste substances, etc., have contributed to

air

pollution

to a greater extent.

For instance

, the burning of crackers during Diwali has reduced the quality of

air

.

Similarly

, the usage of vehicles has

also

contributed to

air

pollution

in Delhi and at

this

rate, all the other states will catch up. Measures need to be implemented by the

government

in order to control

air

pollution

and quality. Failure to do so,

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would lead to the deterioration of human life which will have harmful effects on the human body. The

government

must ensure to plant more trees and provide proper public transport so that people can depend on public transport for commuting by doing

this

individually we could contribute and do our part towards the country.

Such

plans should be implemented throughout the world on a global level.

Finally

, every

one

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person needs to make a conscious effort to sustain the environment and a simple act of planting trees and taking care of them,

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likewise

, carpooling etc., are some of the ways which could contribute by individual effort on a larger scale.