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In the past, the role of a teacher was to provide information. Today, students have access to a lot of information. There is, therefore, no role for teacher in modern education. Do you agree or disagree?

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There is no doubt that these days the
internet
 provides us access to tons of
information
therefore
 we can learn many things in different aspects by ourselves. The question is, are the
internet
 and
information
 resources replaced the teacher's role in contemporary? In
this
 essay, I am going to discuss why I agree or disagree with
this
 claim, and draw my own conclusion. Nowadays, many people believe that the role of the teachers is completely removed when we had access to much
information
 specifically from the
internet
. The main reason given to support
this
 claim is, in the
last
 two decades, the majority of individuals learned themselves from the
internet
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 without helping their teachers. To illustrate that, when someone wants to learn about a specific thing, he can easily go and search on the
internet
, and he can learn about that
information
 he searched about in many ways
such
 as through videos, articles, and so on.
Hence
, anyone can learn what he wants only by researching on the
internet
 and various sources with no help from people.
On the other hand
, others people strongly believe that nothing can take the place of a teacher despite all the technologist assistants that make the process of learning easier.
This
 is because,
although
 the
internet
 provides us with a wide range of
information
, it can not understand want you
want
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 exactly as a human
talk
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talks
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.
For example
, when a student needs more explanation about a specific point in mathematics, he can easily go to his teacher and ask him to explain it
as well as
 discuss how to solve it,
then
 make sure that the point becomes clear in his mind,
while
 the
internet
 can give you the result of
this
 question, and you must elaborate it for yourself. In conclusion,
although
 the
internet
 and many resources
such
 as books have given us access to much data, we still need teachers in education to contact students
as well as
 understand what they want to learn and learn them in the simplest way for the human brain.
Therefore
, I fairly do not agree with
this
 sentence as we can not abandon them.
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