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The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The graph illustrates the total
waste
 of three companies between 2000 and 2015. It is measured in
tonnes
.
Overall
, both
company
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companies
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 A and B had a decline in total
waste
 during 15
years
,
whereas
company
 C had an increase in total
waste
.
To begin
,
company
 A had the highest
waste
, at 12
tonnes
 at the beginning of the period, in 2000. For the next 15
years
,
company
 A achieved to reduce garbage gradually and its end was the second among three
three
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companies, at approximately 8
tonnes
.
In contrast
 to
company
 A,
company
 C had a constant increase, ranging from around 4
tonnes
 in 2000 to well over 9
tonnes
 in 2015. Moving on to
company
 B, there was a unique pattern, compared to the other two companies. There was
a
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an
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 upward trend over the first five
years
,
started
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 at approximately 8
tonnes
 in 2000, and finishing
just
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at just
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 over 9
tonnes
 in 2005, but
then
 completed a significant decrease over the next ten
years
, dropping from around 10 to just 3
tonnes
.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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