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Many people believe that learning a foreign language is a very difficult task. what are the most difficult things about learning a foreign language? What are the best ways to overcome them?explain an include your personal experience or knowledge of these problems.

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Introduction
It is widely recognized that learning a foreign
language
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 is a difficult task, having said that, the vast majority of individuals tend to learn a new
language
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 nowadays.
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Due to
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 the trends of globalism, a considerable number of people are willing to learn a foreign
language
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.
Body paragraph 2
From my point of view,
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writing is the most difficult
things
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thing
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 about learning a foreign
language
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. In terms of speaking a foreign
language
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, it is able to communicate with not only
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words but
also
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body
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languages
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language
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.
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From my experience, I used to use
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languages
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 in school,
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and in
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a
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the
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work place
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workplace
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 as well
when
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as when
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 I started to live in Australia.
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I could understand what they said at the time,
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but having
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 said that, It was difficult to tell what I intended to say, especially when the topic of the conversation was serious and complex
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 as politics and
cultures
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culture
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.
Body paragraph 5
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language
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 helps
delivering
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 what I ought to say and
improving
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a
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communication
skill
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skills
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of
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in
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 a foreign
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especially
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in
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at
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 times
of
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apply
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beginning
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the beginning
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 of learning.
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In addition
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, keeping to try to communicate with people including friends, teachers, and co-workers in a foreign
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 is
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 significant way to overcome the difficulties of learning a foreign
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.
Conclusion
Lastly
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, it is commonly
knowledged
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 that learning a foreign
language
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 is difficult, having said that, keeping to try and using
body
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languages
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language
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 may help to learn it.

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