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The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The table illustrates the production of
milk
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 in four nations during 1990, 2000 and 2010. The
amount
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 of
milk
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 is calculated in
litres
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. At first glance, it can clearly be seen that the highest production of
milk
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 was in
Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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during
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in
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 2010,
while
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 the least
number
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 was in Guatemala in 1990. First of all, in
Netherlands
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the Netherlands
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, the
number
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 of
litres
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 started at 11,262,000
litres
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. After that, the
amount
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 of
milk
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 dropped reaching exactly 11,155,000
litres
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 in 2000. Following that, the
number
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 began to increase landing at 11,466,000
litres
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 in 2010.
According to
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 Australia, the
amount
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 of
milk
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 produced in 1990 was 11,246,000
litres
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. Surprisingly, the
amount
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 of
milk
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 kept decreasing gradually until reaching 9,165,000
litres
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 by the end of 2010. By far, the
number
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 of produced
milk
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 was 87,000
litres
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 in 1990.
Next,
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it began to jump significantly in 2000 and 2010 reaching 1,42,000 and 1,55,000
litres
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, respectively.
Lastly
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, in Guatemala, the
amount
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 of
milk
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 in the first year was 26,000
litres
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.
On the other hand
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, in 2000, it rose
reaching
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to reach
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 55,000
litres
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 and remained climbing getting to 84,000
litres
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 in 2010.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words milk, amount, litres, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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