The table below shows the production of milk annually in four countries in 1990. 2000 and 2010. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The table illustrates the production of
milk
in four nations during 1990, 2000 and 2010. The amount
of milk
is calculated in litres
. At first glance, it can clearly be seen that the highest production of milk
was in Netherlands
Correct article usage
the Netherlands
during
2010, Change preposition
in
while
the least number
was in Guatemala in 1990.
First of all, in Netherlands
, the Correct article usage
the Netherlands
number
of litres
started at 11,262,000 litres
. After that, the amount
of milk
dropped reaching exactly 11,155,000 litres
in 2000. Following that, the number
began to increase landing at 11,466,000 litres
in 2010. According to
Australia, the amount
of milk
produced in 1990 was 11,246,000 litres
. Surprisingly, the amount
of milk
kept decreasing gradually until reaching 9,165,000 litres
by the end of 2010.
By far, the number
of produced milk
was 87,000 litres
in 1990. Next,
it began to jump significantly in 2000 and 2010 reaching 1,42,000 and 1,55,000 litres
, respectively. Lastly
, in Guatemala, the amount
of milk
in the first year was 26,000 litres
. On the other hand
, in 2000, it rose reaching
55,000 Change the verb form
to reach
litres
and remained climbing getting to 84,000 litres
in 2010.Submitted by malak.ayman1 on
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words milk, amount, litres, number with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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