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Some companies let people wear uniform at work. Discuss advantages and disadvantages.

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In
this
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 day and age, in some ,companies it is mandatory that all workers need to wear
uniforms
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. There are some advantages and disadvantages. In
this
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 essay, I will discuss both positive points and negative points and give my opinion.
To begin
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 with, there are a few merits that employees
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uniforms
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 at
work
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. First of all, they do not need to spend a lot of time choosing their daily outfits. So, they can get sleep more or have breakfast. Another reason is that company can improve their service quality.
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, when workers wear an uniform customers can find the employees easily. So, it could possibly improve their service quality.
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, co-workers can feel unity. When
people
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 wear the same clothes every day and
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 together, they can feel unity.
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, there are some drawbacks that workers wearing
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 at
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.
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,
uniforms
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 can be uncomfortable for some
people
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.
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, when someone is pregnant the uniform will be small for the woman who is pregnant.
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,
people
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 are not able to wash their
uniforms
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 daily if there is only one uniform set. And
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, it will be hard to bring it uniformly home wash and dry bring it back to
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To conclude
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, despite the fact that wearing
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 at
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 has many drawbacks, it has more benefits than wearing
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 at
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. Personally, I recommend
people
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 should wear ununiforms at
work
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.

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