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Some companies let people wear uniform at work. Discuss advantages and disadvantages.

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In
this
 day and age, in some ,companies it is mandatory that all workers need to wear
uniforms
. There are some advantages and disadvantages. In
this
 essay, I will discuss both positive points and negative points and give my opinion.
To begin
 with, there are a few merits that employees
wearing
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uniforms
 at
work
. First of all, they do not need to spend a lot of time choosing their daily outfits. So, they can get sleep more or have breakfast. Another reason is that company can improve their service quality.
For example
, when workers wear an uniform customers can find the employees easily. So, it could possibly improve their service quality.
Thirdly
, co-workers can feel unity. When
people
 wear the same clothes every day and
work
 together, they can feel unity.
However
, there are some drawbacks that workers wearing
uniforms
 at
work
.
Firstly
,
uniforms
 can be uncomfortable for some
people
.
For instance
, when someone is pregnant the uniform will be small for the woman who is pregnant.
Secondly
,
people
 are not able to wash their
uniforms
 daily if there is only one uniform set. And
also
, it will be hard to bring it uniformly home wash and dry bring it back to
work
.
To conclude
, despite the fact that wearing
uniforms
 at
work
 has many drawbacks, it has more benefits than wearing
uniforms
 at
work
. Personally, I recommend
people
 should wear ununiforms at
work
.
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