the two maps below show the changes in the town of Denham from 1986 to the present day.

the two maps below show the changes in the town of Denham from 1986 to the present day.
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The two different maps give information about the changes, which have been made to the
town
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of Denham from 1986 to the present day.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the
town
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changed almost generally, including a garden and a primary
school
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and some new
houses
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. In 1986, there were some
houses
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in the west of the
town
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and near these
houses
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were located two shopping stores and a post office. On the right corner of the post office was constructed a primary
school
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. A bridge is located in the North and from the
North-east
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started a river, namely Stoke.
In
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The
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the
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below the
school
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has a garden which has a large house and some kind of trees. Remarkable, by now, in
this
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town
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happened different changes, the
houses
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were multiplied and
farmland
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the farmland
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demolished
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was demolished
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. There used to be a small primary
school
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, but nowadays it largened. Two
shops
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stores were knocked down, but a post office and a bridge are still the same, and there was constructed a new road that was altered the way starting in the South. The main place in the
town
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was
garden
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a garden
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and
this
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enlarged after that started
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Retirement home.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words town, school, houses with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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