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The retoration of old building in major cities in the world involves a lof of government expenditiures. This money should be used in new housing and road development. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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The phenomenon of the
government
 spending a lot of
money
 to restore historical constructions has aroused wide concern among various circles. Divergent as people's views on
this
 issue in question may be, I personally believe that the restoration is worth
to spend
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money
 on it. Of all the reasons why the
government
 should spend
money
 to preserve those old
buildings
, probably the most significant one is that they
respersnets
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represents
 our history and culture, which is too valuable for passing our cultural tradition to lose. Some
buildings
 are the
evidences
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 that
shows
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 the important moments of a country. Without proof, people will gradually forget their historical stories
,
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 and cultural
trandition
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tradition
traditions
transition
 will not be known by our offspring.
Therefore
, the
government
 should keep those
buildings
 in their original state. Another reason that should not be overlooked is that it can bring profit to the country. To illustrate, historical
buildings
 are very popular sightseeing spots for foreigners.
Hence
, the
government
 can rebuild the entire area where surrounding the architecture as a new tourist attraction in order to develop a new financial source.
As a result
, the income can be used to construct some new apartments for solving housing issues and invest in road development to improve the traffic condition. Under
this
 line of thinking, it seems to me that the restoration of old construction can save our cultural tradition and rose the country's profit.
Thus
, I disagree that
money
 should be spent in other fields.
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