In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, many
companies
are likely to stress that their
products
are new in some aspects in their advertisements. In my opinion,
this
can bring about positive influences for the
companies
. Analyzing the increased attention
for
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new
products
and good impressions for the
companies
will prove
this
.
Firstly
, new
products
are much more appealing to the customers.
People
are likely to purchase new
products
out of curiosity, especially when the advertisement
convey
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conveys
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them
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the excellent advantages of the
products
.
For example
, when you are told that a famous cake
company
develop
out
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a cake with
new
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a new
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flavor
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, and in its advertisement, the cake is described with
beautiful
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outlook and great taste. After seeing
this
, customers who enjoy eating cakes or just are going to have their birthday party will likely
to
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purchase
it
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them
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.
Therefore
, many
companies
develop new
products
constantly to attract more attention to maintain their revenue at a high level.
Secondly
,
people
usually have a better impression
on
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companies
which have a strong ability
of developing
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new
products
.
For instance
, the “APPLE”
company
, which has a
lot
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fans around the world, basically publish its new
products
by
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in
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at least one or two years, including
IPhone
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iPhone
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, IPad, Watch, Computer and so on. And nearly every time, the CEO of “APPLE”
company
will hold a launch event, introducing the new functions or the updated system of the new
products
to the audience specifically with passion. Nowadays many
people
have
a
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great admiration for its strong ability of technology development and are addicted to
buy
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the
products
of APPLE, which makes APPLE a
company
with the largest market value all over the world. In conclusion, new
products
can attract more eye
roll
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from
the
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apply
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customers,
as well as
make
people
have
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good recognition
on
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the
company
. If a
company
can develop new
products
constantly, it will have a good impact on its revenue.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • emphasise
  • advertising
  • products
  • innovation
  • competitive strategy
  • consumer dissatisfaction
  • value
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