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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays, many
companies
 are likely to stress that their
products
 are new in some aspects in their advertisements. In my opinion,
this
 can bring about positive influences for the
companies
. Analyzing the increased attention
for
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to
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 new
products
 and good impressions for the
companies
 will prove
this
.
Firstly
, new
products
 are much more appealing to the customers.
People
 are likely to purchase new
products
 out of curiosity, especially when the advertisement
convey
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conveys
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them
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to them
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 the excellent advantages of the
products
.
For example
, when you are told that a famous cake
company
 develop
out
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apply
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a cake with
new
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a new
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flavor
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flavour
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, and in its advertisement, the cake is described with
beautiful
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a beautiful
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 outlook and great taste. After seeing
this
, customers who enjoy eating cakes or just are going to have their birthday party will likely
to
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purchase
it
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them
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.
Therefore
, many
companies
 develop new
products
 constantly to attract more attention to maintain their revenue at a high level.
Secondly
,
people
 usually have a better impression
on
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of
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companies
 which have a strong ability
of developing
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to develop
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 new
products
.
For instance
, the “APPLE”
company
, which has a
lot
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 fans around the world, basically publish its new
products
by
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in
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 at least one or two years, including
IPhone
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iPhone
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, IPad, Watch, Computer and so on. And nearly every time, the CEO of “APPLE”
company
 will hold a launch event, introducing the new functions or the updated system of the new
products
 to the audience specifically with passion. Nowadays many
people
 have
a
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great admiration for its strong ability of technology development and are addicted to
buy
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buying
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 the
products
 of APPLE, which makes APPLE a
company
 with the largest market value all over the world. In conclusion, new
products
 can attract more eye
roll
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rolls
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 from
the
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apply
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customers,
as well as
 make
people
have
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apply
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good recognition
on
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of
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 the
company
. If a
company
 can develop new
products
 constantly, it will have a good impact on its revenue.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • emphasise
  • advertising
  • products
  • innovation
  • competitive strategy
  • consumer dissatisfaction
  • value
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