More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a foreign country. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks?

Studying abroad is one of the important issues for
students
. As time goes on more and more
students
prefer studying at colleges and universities in a different
country
.
This
has some advantages and disadvantages which in
this
essay will talk about them. Studying abroad has some benefits for
students
. Particularly for people who live in the third world and want to continue their education in the first world like the USA,
UK
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.
Firstly
,
students
want to learn the newest
thing
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in their major.
Secondly
, they believe after graduation they might have more job opportunities even if they come back to their home
country
or not.
Finally
, learning new methods of teaching is interesting for them.
For example
, the method of teaching in Iran’s universities is completely different from countries in the first world like the USA.
Moreover
,
students
know that the material of the subjects is newer than their
country
.
However
, there are some disadvantages for
students
who choose to study in a foreign
country
. Homesickness is
the
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one of the most important problems that
students
might face with it. Because they live far away from their families and being alone it may be very difficult. Other issues that they might challenge with them, are adapting
with
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other cultures and communicating and making friends.
For instance
, it is very challenging for most of the
students
to make new friends,
Due to
cultural differences and languages. In conclusion, nowadays most
students
prefer studying abroad because the benefits outweigh its drawbacks, and I think
this
statement is true.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • opportunities
  • personal growth
  • development
  • exposure
  • diverse
  • perspectives
  • language skills
  • job prospects
  • adapting
  • environment
  • financial considerations
  • costs
  • homesickness
  • social isolation
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