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Many people say that the way we communicate has improved because of advances in technology. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#people #advances #technology
The advancement of technology has a lot of benefits in a plethora
aspects
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, particularly for
communication
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tool
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. I personally agree to some extent towards
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 statement, which I will elaborate
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Firstly
, the existence of technology has given a wider
oportunity
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opportunity
 for society to interact with other
people
.
The social
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 media,
such
 as Instagram,
Facebook
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, could be used to start an interaction and to build a relationship with
people
 around the world.
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advantageous
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 because
people
 could have
an
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experience in communicating with
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people
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 some differences,
such
 as culture,
language
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, which could enable
to
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them to
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 learn something new.
Secondly
, many companies could run their
work
 through the digital platform in a certain
case
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cases
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.
For example
,
people
 are urged to do
work
 from home in the pandemic era.
The digital
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 technologies,
such
 as
zoom
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Zoom
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, google
meet
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, help all the activities conducted
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workplace in which
people
 could present their
work
 and share files
to
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the
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other participants which
enable
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 them to run their
work
 maximally. In
this
 digital era,
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deteriorating
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of
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communication
skill
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skills
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 would appear because
people
 prefer to speak on their digital
platform
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platforms
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.
As a result
, they do not have enough
confident
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 to speak directly.
In addition
,
this
 modern era serves freedom for society to express themselves
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 any
platforms
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platform
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;
as a consequence
, they would say anything without any restrictions and they do not concern on
atttitude
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attitude
 how to convey their opinion.
For example
, some influencers have haters who sometimes share hate speech
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 them. In conclusion, It seems to me that
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communication
 could be improved by the advancement of technology.
However
, there is a negative effect on
communication
 skill and their attitude
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 expressing themselves.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • revolutionized
  • efficient
  • accessible
  • inclusive
  • video conferencing
  • geographical barriers
  • reliance
  • reduction
  • personal interactions
  • immediacy
  • misinformation
  • misinterpretation
  • body language
  • tone of voice
  • global collaborations
  • fostered
  • readily available
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