The chart below shows what anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.
the given pie chart and table illustrate the destination of anthropology graduates from a particular university after their graduation and their salary of them.
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the,chart the chart a little more than fifty per cent were able to find a full-time job , Linking Words
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only 5% of them could have a part-time job and continue their postgraduate study. the part-time workers and unemploy show approximately a similar percentage Linking Words
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15% and a little less than it. both the full-time postgraduate study and unknown show exactly a little less than ten per cent.
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these, the table shows a range of salaries of anthropology graduates after 5 years. in the part of salaries,the two lowest items under $50,000 are freelance consultants and the government sector at 5% Linking Words
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they have the two highest incomes over $100,000 at 40% and one-second per cent,in ,addition Linking Words
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private companies have a high
a number of wages between $25,000 and $74,999, it has the lowest incomes over $75,000 and $100,000 that are a quarter % and 30%.
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overall
we can see that the full-time job has the highest number of interests compared to the part-time and postgrad study which is the lowest. Linking Words
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the government sector has the biggest number of incomes over $100,000, it Add the comma(s)
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