Some people think that people are responsible for their happiness. Others feel that happiness depends on other factors in their life. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
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other
people
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my opinion
some
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opinion
happiness
is in their own hands. More and more people
believe this
point of view, and, they try to will be happy. For example
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are happy
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in
the
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woman
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women
happy
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happiness
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happiness
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is connected
with
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people
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, a lot of people
think money is the most important thing for their happiness
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