The diagram below shows the states in the recycling of aluminum drinks cans. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
the recycling of
aluminium
beverage cans
is depicted by stages in the given diagram.
it can be vividly seen that there are four major phases in the life cycle of an aluminium
can. the used drinks cans
made up of aluminium
are collected in dustbins and storage boxes. the boxes of waste cans
are now transported for further
processing. the next stop is the recycling centre, where the cans
are compressed to form blocks by the use of machines. marching ahead, these drink containers are now no more in their actual shape.
moving towards the rest of the information, the blocks of aluminium
cans
are now further
processed in the aluminium
recycling plant. here the old cans
are converted into a hot liquid of aluminium
. aluminium
bars are shaped out of melted aluminium
. now these aluminium
bars are further
moulded to form aluminium
rolls. new cans
are created from these aluminium
rolls. these new aluminium
cans
are now used to fill drinks by beverage companies. after that, these cans
are placed into the drinks machine from where the whole process begins again.
Overall
, there are four stages in aluminium
recycling. the aluminium
recycling plant is the place where aluminium
cans
are transformed into new cans
from old cans
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