According to most projections, the world’s population will continue to rise, until it plateaus at 9 to 11 billion in the latter part of the 21st century. Without a doubt, population growth represents the largest problem facing humanity at present. Do you agree that this is the greatest issue faced by us today?

These days,

human

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population

is rapidly increasing worldwide. I think many governments should pay attention

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issue as it will be adverse in the future. In

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essay, I will give my opinion and reasons with references. First of all,

population

increase causes additional environmental

pollutions

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. Human society

use

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much fossil fuel energy and destruct natural surroundings.

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, construction industries remove a large extent of green areas to build new apartments. Tons of animals lost their habitats and

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due to

construction businesses.

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, human activities are the main reason

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emitting carbon dioxide.

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,

population

growth will trigger harder air pollution. For

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, a substantial amount of

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is harmful to

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nature. On top of that, too large

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let people

make

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excessive effort. People have to compete to get fancy jobs and enter famous universities rather than before.

Such

competition

frustrate

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people's satisfaction

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their lives.

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, it is difficult for governments to create new tables to deal with

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citizens

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as those plan requires a long period.

For instance

, in some countries which have a big

population

, citizens prefer studying abroad as getting an offer from famous national colleges is much harder. Students of those countries struggle with preparing

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learning

due to

many rivals or expensive education

budget

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.

Therefore

, some

contries

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countries

may have to solve the expanding

population

to release the competitive phenomenon. In conclusion, the world's

population

issue should be considered because it may environmental and social problems without any prevention plans.

Therefore

,

govenments

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governments

have to prepare

expected

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issues and try to manage expanding

population

.