You have learned from a news article that a real estate company is going to build a shopping centre near your home. However, you think that the shopping centre should not be built there. Write a letter to the city counsellor. In your letter, say how you have learned about the plan explain how it is going to negatively affect the residential area where you live say what you think the city council should do about it

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am a resident of the Charlosis Society. I am decided to write a letter after reading an article in the newspaper about building a mall in our society.

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, constructing a shopping mall near our residential area will put a negative effect on society.Our area is already small and overpopulated. No doubt, the shopping centre has its own parking area but on busy days sometimes maybe visitors park their vehicles on our streets it would occur a problem for us.

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, it affects badly on children and young generations. Children would have remained in some limited playing space.

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the young generation would spend time in the mall enjoyment with friends rather than going to school and college. I advise you stop to

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construction and planned

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move from here to another open location. You can release a stay notice to the brokerage about

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plan. We would really appreciate your positive decision. Yours sincerely, Aman

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Task Achievement: 8.0

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8 paragraphs

162 words

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