Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child’s success in school. Do you agree with this statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

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It is believed that

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friends

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are crucial importance of affecting than fathers and mother on a kid’s

success

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college

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. I partially agree with

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statement and

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essay will show specific reasons and illustrations. On the one hand, classmates have a significant influence on a child’s behaviour and his or her

success

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school

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. Because

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they

expend

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much more

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than being with their parents at that place.

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, they have many things in common

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as age, interests and skills. So, they discuss all their knowledge, solve problems together, and gain a lot of experience together and sharing all these makes them closer. Some of them

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friends

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after

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time

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and spent their spare

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together.

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friends

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tend to copy each other’s habits and manners.

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, my neighbour became

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with a boy who did not have excellent grades at

school

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. Because he does not care about his

friends

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’ good grades at

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. So, when they started to spend their

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together and share with interests, the boys’ grades improved suddenly. They did homework together and

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their dreams. From

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, the point I must agree classmates are able to change a child’s attitude at

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On the other hand

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, parents have a great influence on a kid’s

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school

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too. If the father or mother shows an interest in the child’s progress and talks to her or him about the importance of learning I think children strive to do their best.

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, I have a friend whose parents are polite and they are able to demonstrate to their kids which is the wrong or right direction.

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, classmates might influence a child's

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in dissimilar ways in

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college

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Ensure that the essay directly addresses the prompt and provides a clear stand regarding the influence of classmates and parents on a child's success in school.

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Use logical paragraph structure and transition words to improve coherence and cohesion. Reorganize the ideas to create a more organized and effective essay structure.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

292 words

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

some people thinks thatb our world is shrinking by the internet's benefits wile others argue that it has a adverse effect on civilizations dure to poor family relationships Discuss both views