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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious problem, as well practical problems.

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In the modern era, individuals are opting by getting to know about life in a different country and take there a new experience followed by the condition in another country probably
people
also
 have problems with getting used to noticing distinct
language
 changes living there. The ensuing paragraphs will consume the impact has had on a person`s
language
 cases perceiving a useful skill with a bad difficulty by finding a decision with the deal. One of the most problems of difficult condensing the
language
 case
people
 had taken the issues by surviving in another territory
such
 as a first view notice diverse types of habitats accent and their conservation in that occurrence appears to deal with misunderstanding.
In addition
, without social skills communication was deliberately happening between native speakers and learning individuals acting as
non native
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 speakers does not know slang or usual conversation
due to
 they had taught a formal side of speeches and had no idea conducting the dialect with citizens. A possible solution to
this
 problem is that before as going for existing as a migrant
whereas
 adults should recognize their
language
 possibilities in communication with the nationality of that countryside. Meanwhile should advise other
people
 who live there and ask about their experience with the country's speeches of
people
,
also
 need to come there as a tourist to look at speaking way of originally conversing and practice
instead
 of living in a different state over years with a serious
language
 situation. Taking everything into consideration, I strongly believed beforehand that coming to other countries to take note of which difficult
language
 situation you would get by living there to come a few times than reside the state as a beginner without communication and social skills.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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