The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.

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The plans illustrate the Southwest
airport's
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site before and after the refurbishment which will be done in the next year.
It is clear that
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lots of features
such
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as ATM and Sky train will be added to the site,
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however
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some parts are not going to see a change like security and Passport control. First of all,
walkway
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the walkway
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will be substituted with
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train and the shops
which
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will be added to the vacant area between the security and Sky train.
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addition
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a Bag drop,
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an ATM and a car hire will be added to the site. The number of Cafe, arrival and departure doors will be doubled.
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, the number of
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the gate
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gate
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will be increased from 10 to 18.
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, the
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location will be changed to the opposite corner
while
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customs , security and passport control will not see any change during the refurbishment in the next year.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • terminal
  • car park
  • runways
  • redevelopment
  • proposed changes
  • expanded terminals
  • new gates
  • additional parking
  • amenities
  • navigation
  • environmental impact
  • economic impact
  • job creation
  • traffic congestion
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