A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweight its drawbacks?

In recent years, travel has been the first source of income in many countries. Because a lot of people are taking travel as a job or hobby, several lands decide to take
this
trend seriously and try to benefit from it,
while
others deny that. In
this
essay, I will explore some merits of that trend on how it is strengthening the economic system and demerits on how it will disturb some people.
To begin
with, countries trying to prevent the downturn and recession by using tourism.
For example
, Dubai has been flourishing dramatically since it welcomed people from all over the world. The government constructs many entertainment places to attract tourists, which led to an increase in employment opportunities, especially for youth.
In addition
, most tripper spend all their savings when they travel with will have a positive impact on the country's income.
However
, states like the US have many sources of revenue
such
as industry, agriculture, and tourism is one of these but not the main ones. Because nothing is guaranteed in
this
world.
For instance
, in 2018 when the coronavirus stopped the world, it was a real crisis for countries because travelling was not allowed at that time which led to an economic decline for those who depend on tourism.
Likewise
, a huge number of tourists can make some venues crammed uncontrollably, so the local population will feel uncomfortable in their home place.
To conclude
, I believe that lands must have many ways to improve their income not only one n anticipation of any catastrophe that could happen globally.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sustainable tourism
  • Ecotourism
  • Heritage sites
  • Cultural heritage
  • Tourism revenue
  • Environmental conservation
  • Eco-friendly
  • Tourist influx
  • Local economy
  • Diversification
  • Commercialization
  • Authenticity
  • Displacement
  • Gentrification
  • Carrying capacity
  • Hospitality industry
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